I turned the burner up a little with this [intlink id="4574" type="post"]sonnet[/intlink]—okay, a lot. But I also toyed with another concept here and will leave it to you, my faithful fans, to discover it. If you do–drop it in the comments….
You Folks Rock!!!
The Burn
Hungry fire builds in your emerald eyes
Those gorgeous orbs burning with constant greed
They taunt me, singe me, and tell me no lies
They blaze ’cause it’s me you want, crave, and need
Your touch gentle and warm, yet aching
And your lips glowing sweetly against mine
Inflamed moans claiming you’re mine for taking
Your Gasps searing lustful trails up my spine
Your throat seethes passion, calling for my hold
Ardor rises as your breasts beg my lips
A fever in your swells as they unfold
My seed ignites your honey as it drips
Our flesh and bone doth spark the night skies
Starting with the boil in your wanting eyes
Very hot. Amazingly graphic yet sensual.
I love reading poems and this is one of my inspirations to write my own…
Poems are very creative and we have to remember that they are created well…Thanks for the inspiration..
This is great poem. I love it
Yeah, I would say you turned the burner way the hell up!!
I love the poem and I am looking forward to create just like this one…
I can be a good writer in poems too…I can learn from this…
Hands down to this poem. Such a masterpiece, Alex.
Thank you so much, Lola.
I like that last line – “Starting with the boil in your wanting eyes” – sortta get’s my motor running – whew!
Believe me- by the time I wrote that last line, my motor was in overdrive and about spent
Thanks for stopping by!
I have always loved sonnets. This sonnet reflects passionate love that has been described very beautifully. ‘Your throat seethes passion” this was the line that I loved the most. Keep it up!
I love poems and this is awesome for me…
We all know that writing poems are not easy but this is a good example…
I love poems and that is one of my frustrations in life…Anyway, thanks for the inspiration…
I am not good in writing poems and you are my inspiration…Thanks!!