Correen posted an update in the group Reviewers Lounge: 1 year, 5 months ago · updated 1 year, 5 months ago · View
Not sure if this is the proper place to post cuz my story is already published on here, please let me know if it should be placed somewhere else on EWN. I’d like your opinion on this 55 worder. My idea after rereading it a bazillion times…the one words at the end of each line kills the flow. I’d love to hear your thoughts about it…http://extremewritingnow.com/authors/coupled/
I have a love affair with fragmented sentences. They express an impact that is commanding and demands the reader to pay attention. I really like they way you are telling two tales with the one word fragments, because I think this story needs to have the flow interrupted to pull it off. Perhaps it is the choice of words themselves. Time to dust off the thesaurus
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