Pots filled with decaying food adorn the stove in the tiny, once charming kitchen. Trash, clothes, and sand cover the new hard wood floor.
There’s a stench coming from the corner… Ashley is afraid to look. Could there be something dead over there? Someone?
If he’s not dead he would be soon. “Two days alone!”
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I am finding that most of our stories are evoking the initial reaction of, “OUCH!”….very damn funny….
Men. Pffft.
Sadly accurate, so very good!!!
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Made me laugh, even if it is oh, so, true!
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LOL An everywoman story if I ever heard one.
That does paint a scene with few words.
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Bet he is gonna regret leaving that now stinky thing that’s laying around..lmao!
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