She’s at a birthday party, her friend turned 9.
Outside the snow falls quietly. But, a snowstorm is on the way.
It’s 8pm. She must leave for home, a warning from her parents. Outside and in the storm rages.
You must stay.
You must leave now.
Late home, she moves from one storm to another…
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Carrie is a Jack of all Trades and Site Advisor at EWN, trying her writing hand at fiction (in its many forms), poetry, SEO, blog posts, articles, essays and reviews. She currently resides at http://www.hentracks.co.uk
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Was just thinking last night that when we are children we are often left to make decisions on our own. These decisions are generally based on what our guardians teach us…
Very nice reflection
That does capture the space children often find themselves in, metaphorically if not literally.
karen´s last blog ..The Eye Of The Dragon 55 Spoken Words
Unfortunately, it’s a true experience and as you can tell, it left a huge mark on me
yeah, it sounded like memoir to me.
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