Welcome to Extreme Writing Now

Come on in and join the fun

The social side of our network:

  • ACTIVITY
  • FORUMS
  • GROUPS
  • MEMBERS
  • REGISTER
  • ABOUT EWN
  • SITE MAP
  • Home Delivery
  • Member Login

    Lost your password?

    Not a member yet? Sign Up!

    Lucky’s Day

    September 1, 2009
    By Alex Crabtree

    LuckyLucky’s green cap and jacket helped him blend into the canopy as he scanned the forest with his binoculars. A menacing smile played across his face when he spied the iron pot.

    Snap! He looked in the direction of the sound.

    He saw the urchins. Good, he thought.

    He watched as they jumped at the pot of yellow moons, pink hearts, and green clovers. He saw the earth swallow them and the pot.

    Lucky shimmied down the tree and scurried to the edge of the pit. Looking to the bottom of the hole, he saw two sets of frightened eyes that seemed to be pleading for help.

    “You two ne’r do wells had better get yer fill of me Lucky Charms. My friends seem a bit frisky.” He sneered as he pointed a crooked finger towards five vipers that were making their way towards the children.

    With an evil laugh he turned and skipped through the forest, seeking the Silly Rabbit to boast about his triumph.

    © 2009, Alex Crabtree. All rights reserved.

    Years ago I started writing Flash Fiction for just the sheer enjoyment of writing, and now it has turned into a full blown addiction. I can't quit the horse, man! Another dirty little secret about me is my ability to write all kinds of web content. SEO content, articles, blog posts, manifests; you name it, I'll write it. Looking for some help? My gun hangs at r.alex.crabtree@gmail.com
    Alex Crabtree
    View all posts by Alex Crabtree
    Alexs website

    Tags: , , ,

    Comments
    • Holley September 1, 2009 at 1:58 pm

      You forgot to eat this morning, didn’t you?

    • Alex Crabtree September 1, 2009 at 2:11 pm

      SOL….maybe. What you doin’ for dinner?

    • MiMi September 1, 2009 at 7:10 pm

      Dude’s evil!

      • Alex Crabtree September 1, 2009 at 9:04 pm

        Why do you say that? Lucky was always the underdog.

        Wait. I know why you think he was evil; he went to brag to the Silly Rabbit. Yeah, that was a little too much.

    • Correen September 2, 2009 at 8:01 pm

      Back to your bridge you evil troll…I hope the Silly Rabbit bops you on the head!

    • drifter0658 March 17, 2011 at 2:36 pm

      @BluHypnoEyes @mamatreelee @lilwldchld @cynthiap713 I almost forgot this…perfect for today => http://bit.ly/ebV6ax #shameless #plug

    • *Kacy* March 18, 2011 at 2:22 am

      Awesome :) RT @Drifter0658: @felyn @Jkewell A St. Patrick's Day Quickie => http://bit.ly/ebV6ax

    • Alex March 18, 2011 at 4:32 pm

      @H0TMessBarbie It is a day late, but toss this to your daughter http://bit.ly/ebV6ax LOL

    • Alex September 25, 2011 at 2:09 am

      @H0TMessBarbie @rovingvagabond http://t.co/KRZgZJZu Lucky's Day

    • H0TMessBarbie™® September 25, 2011 at 2:15 am

      @H0TMessBarbie @rovingvagabond http://t.co/KRZgZJZu Lucky's Day

    • CommentLuv Enabled

      Threaded commenting powered by Spectacu.la code.




    Ads Plugin created by General Web Directory - Powered by Laptop Cases and online casino blackjack.